At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is well-known that with an increase in the rate of population, some countries have more young adults relative to the older ones such as India. Which will have both the positive and negative impacts on the nation. I would rather say that there are more benefits to this situation which I will explain in my further statements.
Firstly, I would like to discuss the disadvantages of this scenario, increase in the growth of young generation will put the burden on the government to produce more jobs, otherwise, there will be more jobless people around which can even mislead them to criminal offenses. However, the pay scale will also fall as the availability of the people in any profile will be more than required.
Secondly, looking at the positive side of the context it is clear that the young crowd is beneficial in the social and economic growth of any society. There will be more young workforce which can be used in any field and can lead to fast work rather its IT sector, Doctors or manufacturing. Moreover, as the workforce is in between 25-40 years, there will be more healthy people and medical facilities are less required. The new generation has new innovative ideas which help to discard old ideas and move forward in the race of growth and development globally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...e less required. The new generation has new innovative ideas which help to discard old ideas a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80630630631 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59748650147 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0934582751 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.555555556 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865583876554 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395625672956 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512520653078 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684675603052 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046768487401 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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