Children s education is expensive In some countries the government pays some of or all of the costs Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages

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Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

In recent years, there is a growing consideration of government in terms of education, particularly payment for children’s education. While it is argued by many that payment for children’s education is incredibly beneficial to not only the individuals who enjoy it but also the society at large, there still some arguments against this issue. Overall, it is my personal view that government paying for children’s education has both negative and positive impact on society.

First of all, when it comes to its advantages, full or partial free of tuition fee definitely encourages studying, thu...

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Moreover, it relieve the burden for family
Moreover, it relieves the burden for family

it may significantly contributes to the development of the country
it may significantly contribute to the development of the country

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This is a very good essay! However, in my opinion it's a bit hard to read(. Maybe you should avoid using lots of linking words))