Saving Endangered Animal
All attempts as to saving facing-extinction animal species have been conducted hitherto, however a
disputable contention has generally appeared among people whether the overall result of this effort
has been counterproductive or not related to valuable resources. In this passage I personally argue
that all trials to save those animals are effective enough to evade the extinction of animal. Two main
reasons are as follows.
First of all, endangered animal species, such as black rhinoceros, Galapagos turtle, cougar, snow
leopard, orangutan, etc., have lost their habitat due to human exploration. People working in
industries prefer exterminate spacious forest area, where animals live in, to build their conglomerate-
like company without concerning the animals. Regarding to that fact, both non-governmental
organizations (NGO) and government organization are trying to minimize the influence of industries
project. The result of the act certainly affect the animal protection. For instance, some organizations
carry out forest and land cultivation program - apparently costly and time-consuming project to
revitalize animals surroundings - in order to restore animal’s dwelling and environment by devising
some places like wildlife reserve, animal conservation or sanctuary where animals are well monitored
and protected frequently so that live continuity of an animal is able to implemented.
Secondly, almost all of rare animal’s death are utmost caused by illegal hunting and undercover
market. In spite of government’s strictly-regulated law, animal huntsman keep doing this because of
its beneficial and valuable earnings. Accordingly, many struggle to reduce illicit animal killing and
chase animal hunters.
In summary, Wasting relevant resources hardly become an effect of protecting and preserving
threatened animals. Equally importantly, people are responsible to maintain and conserve animal and
its home so as to natural balance will be kept relentlessly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...l huntsman keep doing this because of its beneficial and valuable earnings. Accor...
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...ial and valuable earnings. Accordingly, many struggle to reduce illicit animal killing and ...
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...tain and conserve animal and its home so as to natural balance will be kept relentless...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, in summary, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.20422535211 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36372541062 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69014084507 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.3723670774 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.538461538 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370901121053 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10491444416 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732578418081 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875157647423 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838381585367 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.68 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.