Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement do you agree or disagree give reasons for your answer and include relative examples from your
Working mines didn't have barriers like age .nowadays, society is believing that old age people should not do they work once they reach the age of retirement in my perspective, I didn't really agree with this type of ideology like the given statement that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement working after retirement leads to give self satisfaction and peacefulness.
David a modern technology and modern lifestyle brought profound changes in all age groups perspective and mind set. Now a days majority of aged people who are retired from their works are more interested to work moreover this is the right way of thinking for society in all aspects there are numerous number of benefits with old people working in every sector time is adorable valuable older people have a good time management skills show bi hiring older people who are already retired from the same work will able to share their experiences which is helpful to manage some difficult works or terrible works older people have a ability of patients to control or guide the new staff in company famous personalities like Sudha Murthy who is the chief advisor of Wipro is also working after her retirement there are a lot more advantages with this.
Countries like China give a chance to older people to work this step leads to increase the income of the country on the other hand it is going to implement in other countries like India Africa and Australia majorly Germany Germany government regularised the old man working act legitimate Re this type of situations eradicate the economic catastrophic conditions however working experiences after retirement gives self satisfaction and great peacefulness senior citizens give a new way of income generator giving a way to work after retirement create a lot of advantages like experiences new experiences f effective work and creating economical strengths
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06031746032 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71062781462 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530158730159 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 20.2975951904 384% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 240.641200753 49.4020404114 487% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 398.5 106.682146367 374% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.75 20.7667163134 379% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287607009623 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171018982902 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129878038752 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219066001688 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114329727586 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 13.0946893788 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.15 50.2224549098 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 11.3001002004 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.1190380762 328% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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