Dear Ritu,I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health and good spirit. My flight back home was good and I landed back safely yesterday.I would like to express my gratitude towards you and your family for being a great host during my stay in your ho

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Dear Ritu,

I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health and good spirit. My flight back home was good and I landed back safely yesterday.

I would like to express my gratitude towards you and your family for being a great host during my stay in your house. I really had a good time and felt comfortable in an unknown city. Moreover, I thoroughly enjoyed the meals cooked by your mother. They were delicious and I cannot wait to try the recipes she shared with me.

However, when I reached home, I realized that I have forgotten my wallet in the cupboard's drawer. Hopefully, you will be able to find it easily. It contains some important invoices which I would need later. I will have to submit few of them for official purpose.

Whenever you get time this week, I would request you to please send it to my office address through courier. I would be very grateful to you and I hope you will forgive me for my clumsiness. This is first time in my life that I forgot to carry my wallet. Maybe, age is catching up with me.

Hope to see you again soon. Please be my guest during upcoming Christmas vacations. We will go for an adventure trip and invite John as well.

Best regards,
RS

Dear Ritu,

I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health and good spirit. My flight back home was good and I landed back safely yesterday.

I want to thank you and your parents for being an extraordinary host during my stay in your home. I really had a good time and felt comfortable in an unknown city. Also, I thoroughly enjoyed the meals cooked by your mother. They were delicious and I can't wait to try the recipes she shared with me.

Nevertheless, when I reached home, I realized that I have forgotten my wallet in the cupboard's drawer. It contains some important invoices which I would need later. I will have to submit few of them for official purposes.

Whenever you get time this week, I would request you to please send it to my office address through courier. I would be very grateful to you and I hope you will forgive me for my clumsiness. This is first time in my life that I forgot to carry my wallet. Maybe, age is catching up with me.

Hope to see you again soon in my city next time. Please give me a chance to host you during next Christmas vacations. We will go for some adventure trip and invite John as well.

Best regards,
RS

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d safely back in Delhi yesterday. I would like to thank you and your parent...
^
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reat host during my stay in your house. I really had a good time and felt comfort...
^
Line 11, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bedrooms'' or 'bedroom's'?
Suggestion: bedrooms'; bedroom's
...gotten my wallet in the drawer near the bedrooms cupboard. It contains some important i...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57324840764 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3532424461 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5194836339 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.2307692308 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0769230769 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375987281933 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111957535394 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109523279647 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195411587396 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763913681097 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

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