Essay topics: You have spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised that you left you wallet there. Write a letter to your fiend. In your letterthank your fiend for being the hostexplain that you left your wallet in their house.g

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Essay topics: You have spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised that you left you wallet there. Write a letter to your fiend. In your letter

thank your fiend for being the host

explain that you left your wallet in their house.

give them instructions on how to send it back you you

Dear Ritu,

I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health and high spirit. My flight back home was wonderful and I landed back safely yesterday.

I want to express my gratitude towards you and your family for being an extraordinary host during my stay in your home. I really had an awesome time and felt comfortable in an unknown city, which I had never visited before. Moreover, I thoroughly enjoyed the different cuisines by your mother, especially for me. They were delicious and I cannot wait to try the recipes she shared with me.

However, when I reached home, I realized that I have forgotten my wallet in the cupboard's drawer. It contains some important invoices which I would need later. I will have to submit few of them for official purpose.

Whenever you get time this week, I would request you to please send it to my office address through speed post. I would be very grateful to you and I hope you will forgive me for my clumsiness. This is first time in my life that I forgot to carry my wallet. Maybe, age is catching up with me.

Hope to see you again soon. Please be my guest during next Christmas vacations. We will go for an adventure trip and invite John as well.

Regards,
RS

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... your mother. They were delicious and I cant wait to try the recipes she shared with...
^^^^
Line 13, column 86, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cupboards'' or 'cupboard's'?
Suggestion: cupboards'; cupboard's
... that I have forgotten my wallet in the cupboards drawer. It contains some important invo...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41743119266 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36720360155 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6846898967 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.1875 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31019055638 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874826347919 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918403952214 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158288912467 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623124083801 0.0580467560999 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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