You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•Describe the item•Explain where and when you left it•Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to report you that I have left my handbag on interrail train on 23rd September.

First of all, it is yellow in colour and it has Gucci named button on it which represents its brand. It also includes many vital documents such as my passport and ID card as well as huge amount of money.

Secondly, I was travelling to Newyork form Florida that day. My seat was A20 on business class. I was in hurry to be on time to the vitally important meeting given the fact that there was an hour delay due to thunderstorm in Newyork. I left it on my seat due to a mistake.

Finally, I would like you to check if it has still been there or it is safe at Lost Item Department. I also be grateful if you could contact with me immediately after you are informed so that I will go to the station to collect it. I hope it will have collected it until monday.

Thank you for assitance in this matter and I am waiting your reply promptly.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Brown

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: yellow
... 23rd September. First of all, it is yellow in colour and it has Gucci named button on it whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, such as, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26041666667 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41358909643 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651041666667 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8318648761 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225196886863 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671357579936 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078168096819 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114952665586 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093727464628 0.0580467560999 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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