Incresing the price of petrol directly way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems.Do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
...ng lots of environmental problems.it is argue that if the price of petrol will be inc...
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Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...etrol will be increase than the problems like traffic jam and pollution will be d...
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Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ther paragraphs with suitable examples. There are the various reasons which comp...
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Line 1, column 422, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ompelled me to agree with this statement .Firstly, if the price of the petrol will...
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Line 1, column 424, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...pelled me to agree with this statement .Firstly, if the price of the petrol will be ris...
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Line 1, column 522, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...le will not use their cars more and they will go outside just to complete their n...
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Line 1, column 578, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e just to complete their necessary works so due to this traffic on the road will ...
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Line 1, column 747, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...xplain with the help of an example that i was listening to BBC news it revealed t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nsive so people do not go outside more. my other supporting point with it that ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... my other supporting point with it that w...
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Line 1, column 1082, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... my other supporting point with it that when people will not go outside mo...
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... my other supporting point with it that when people will not go outside more on ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...l be automatically reduce.for instance, i was going through an article which was ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...diseases because there is no pollution. To conclude, it is clear in the above es...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58754863813 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52171900764 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470817120623 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.460421888 49.4020404114 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.5 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.8333333333 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119850131994 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744398667015 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479706434398 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119850131994 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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