Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarket rather than small shops or local markets? Is this positive or negative for development? Discuss and give your opinion.
Owing to innovations in retail sector, shopping is gaining popularity by leaps and bounds. A lion’s share of society always choose shopping in big malls rather than local market. This essay will cast light on both views before making a final note.
To begin with, there are ample benefits why number of people prefer shopping in supermarkets. The predominant benefit is convenience. To be more precise, such places provide lots of amenities for customers like free parking, air-conditioned climate, free home delivery and many more. What is more, it always offers better support while buying any product. Another advantage is, people often visit and purchase from such places just because of status in society. Moreover, due to not only more discounts but also the availability of the product, these two benefits always attract people for shopping in supermarkets rather than local markets.
On the contrary, in spite of having some merits of shopping in malls, local markets do offer some benefits to customers. Initially, a small shop owner does not waste wealth on such kind of infrastructure. As a result, they can give more discounts to consumers compared to big malls. In addition, most of the local markets available in every city in fact every small town. Therefore, customers can get easy access to them.
To recapitulate, although buying from local markets which provides good discounts and so on, supermarkets or shopping mall gives a pleasant experience to customers. That is why I firmly believe that this trend is indeed positive for the present as well as the future of the retail market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...n's share of society always choose shopping in big malls rather than local market....
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... share of society always choose shopping in big malls rather than local market. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in fact, kind of, as a result, as well as, in spite of, on the contrary, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18631178707 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73341456359 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9423390654 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334845149024 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902670543018 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729087856299 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190339514262 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225431798115 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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