In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for it and how can it be solved?
In this era of fast food, people are at a higher risk of diseases related to poor health or deficiency of nutrition. Owing to this, it is debatable that people are facing lots of issues regarding health because they prefer to live in not healthy ways. Reasons and possible solutions to this situation are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are ample of reasons why people choose unhealthy ways. The predominant reason is hectic lifestyle. To be more precise, most of the people spend their whole day either in office or on school. What is more, during their working period they eat anything from market or any shop which is not healthy for them. Reluctance is another problem among many people. It means, people become tired when they come from the office and they order some foods on online otherwise they elect to eat in restaurants. In addition, people did not have a proper guideline regarding this problem like what are the effects create on their body and so on.
However, there are plenty of ways in which this problem could be solved. Initially, people should always prefer home made food which have high calories or nutritious instead of eating in any shop because it is helpful not only for their health but also they save wealth without spending on junk food. Another solution is, if people wish to eat somewhere in restaurant or in hotel then they could choose those kind of food which cannot create detrimental effects on their health. Lastly, government should add health related subject in school curriculum, as a result, children never face any kind of problem regarding health at tender age.
To recapitulate, it is rightly said that “Health is wealth “, even though there are some effects on people’s health because of hectic lifestyle, I firmly believe that it could be solved some ways such as always prefer home made food, add subject in school curriculum and so on.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 404, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...rant or in hotel then they could choose those kind of food which cannot create detrimental...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, regarding, so, then, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90881458967 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43767101994 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544072948328 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7547166879 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302651306889 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102178615731 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489360508607 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176651801073 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05549047756 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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