Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, peace and order has been affected by the significant rise of noise pollution which can affect urban settlers’ daily lives and there are those who are of the belief that laws should be enacted to prevent these noise disturbances. However, there are those who think that the laws would be insufficient to control the issue.
Those who subscribe to the view that a strict implementation of a law against noise pollution think that this can help a person to live in peace and harmony. People who work on different shift are given the right to have a good and sound sleep without worrying on getting startled in the middle of their sleep due to the banging of the noises. In addition, policies on controlling the volume of the noise produced can minimize problems with public disturbances due to the settlers being undisciplined in the streets. For instance, urban places are prone to meaningless production of noises brought about by independent groups of riders who like showing off their upgraded cars with large speakers for music and entertainment thus jeopardizing peace and order.
However, there are those who think laws alone are not enough to solve the ongoing problem with noise in the long run. The laws require a pool of manpower to patrol over the streets that are prone to such public hiatus which entails a huge sum of financial support that are supposedly equated to other problems aside from noise. Furthermore, town festivals and other cultural events may be affected as the implementation of the laws can prohibit the organizers to go all out with providing entertaining programs. If the policies limit the people from having to enjoy in situations such as these, the urban community would suffer as the essence of cultural celebrations may cease to exist.
As a whole, policies on reducing noise pollution may be of help for working individuals and for those who are after public safety. However, such laws can be financially unattainable on a long term basis and can affect cultural celebrations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00879765396 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76607530457 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519061583578 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.408610915 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174106831521 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731232490048 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353189005855 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115708343312 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172406393254 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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