Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment.
Introduce yourself
Describe problems you are facing because of this
Suggest solutions
Dear sir,
My name is James Brown. I hail from Canada; live in Achole area where ‘SISKA’ apartment is located. My flat number is 26 of the said apartment. I am writing this letter to complain about the ongoing construction of your office next to my residence.
Because of the construction work is being done, the whole material such as cement, tools and gravel is placed on the road, which makes people uncomfortable while passing from there. In addition to it, the noise is arising due to the substantial construction activity for 24 hours; is making the whole situation worse, especially during the night time.
It is undoubtedly cleared that although you have a right to use the public road; however, I suggest you make a way for people to move easily from there. Moreover, as mentioned above, due to the heavy machine work, the noise is being produced alot. Therefore, I would be grateful if the noisy activity work is done during the day time so that all the people in an apartment could take well sleep at night.
hoping for prompt action in this matter!
Yours faithfully,
James Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, My name is James Brown. I hail from Cana...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hoping
...nt could take well sleep at night. hoping for prompt action in this matter! ...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing for prompt action in this matter! Yours faithfully, James Brown
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Line 23, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r! Yours faithfully, James Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93193717277 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68252959404 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7150900646 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11496810428 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448076520234 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660831374953 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552947565486 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515824756701 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.