It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
The 21st century, a modern era, has been developed and the world has become a global village due to the development of Internet. People are using it to collect information regarding their subject, research, and also while doing job. Are all informations available on the internet available? Some people believe it as an excellent means of communication, while others think of it as unsuitable place for information. I opine strongle that internet might not be only with perks and information presented might is unreliable.
To begin with, Internet has information of different topics like education and business as the website creators/developer convey the information on all those topics. Moreover, people find different information in same place so the use of internet makes it easier and faster to get information for them. Students, for example, need to do studies and make presention on their selected subjects which becomes difficult to gather from library and are also more time consuming. However, the internet can provide information to them in colleges websites or Wikipedia. Therefore, internet has become helpful.
On the contrary, Internet sometimes provides false information as anyone with computer can have access over the data and might change those data which was originally presented. In addition, the communication through internet can be troublesome sometimes as they might be hacked and there are no any privacies on the internet. Webpages like facebook , for instance, are not only hacked but also used by companies for advertising and commercial purposes. Thus, there are no proper cyber-security and has resulted in cyber scams and even theft.
To conclude, Although there are pro's and con's of using internet, the lack of cyber security and increment of cyber scam makes demerits overweigh their merits. Overall, the chances of falsifying the information available on internet makes the vast data unreliable.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-04-04 | extraterres3al | 56 | view |
| 2021-01-26 | mainagioia29 | 67 | view |
| 2020-09-19 | Agu Blessing | 73 | view |
| 2020-09-04 | AhaanIshaan | 73 | view |
| 2020-06-08 | Shuklaksh | 66 | view |
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. 61
- Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. 67
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant. 56
- The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 293, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...s as they might be hacked and there are no any privacies on the internet. Webpages...
^^
Line 13, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... on the internet. Webpages like facebook , for instance, are not only hacked but a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48013245033 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00102187536 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3075037525 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196388181076 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689195654863 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888229116786 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117453689217 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734856771323 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.