Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems.
Do you agree or disagree?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Some people suggest that because of our new life-style, it is inevitable to work after the age of 60, whilst others say that being semi-retired and keep working after the age of 60 is causing some problem.
It is naively suggested by some people that it is normal to work after the age of 60. They claim that because of our new way of living, which parents help children with their expenses, elderlies should work at their 60s. Only this way can parents provide essentials for their children. Working can bring about liveliness to our life. Many employees find weekends muddling and want to work on their weekends too. This is because we are used to work or study, hence working for elderlies can lead to a more enjoyable time. However, this may seem not true.
Although working after 60 can lead to a more lively life, some people logically believe that elderlies should rest and they should not continue working at their last years. Many of us work to have a tranquil life in order to have enough money to spend. However, because of our lifestyle, we tend to spend the majority of our budget for daily living expenses, leaving us with no money for our retirement. The real culprit here is the government. Those who are in power should control inflation so that people be able to save money, especially for their retirement days. One of the jobs of the government is to provide a healthier life for people; in this case, provide retirement plans for elderlies so that they have a less stressful life.
By and large, there are some truths in working brings liveliness, the government, however, should offer some loans for older people to have less stressful life in their last years and find no need to work instead of resting.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to working'.
Suggestion: used to working
...ir weekends too. This is because we are used to work or study, hence working for elderlies c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83766233766 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81518782849 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.115964931 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230464641784 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883582045912 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117909125124 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175298001961 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701502821821 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.