in many countries women and men are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Having a full-time job is a norm for women and men in many countries. This means that they should share house-related jobs with each other equally. It seems that although women are better at managing the house, it is both women and men’s task to do household jobs.
Ancestors believed that it is in the woman’s nature to manage the house, and the man should manage the family. This, however, belongs to the past, in that there is no distinction between genders in today’s work environment. All men and women attempt to have a tranquil life by working together in order to bring income for the family. Given the fact that women tend to be weaker than men, it is excessively unbearable for women to both work full-time and take care of the house. Arguably working both in office and home is unacceptable for females.
It appears that man should participate and help the woman in household tasks. For example, men should do tasks like washing the dishes, vacuum the rooms, and pick up children from the school. At first, brush, taking part in might seems impossible for men, because women are better at upbringing and managing the house intrinsically, men, however, can learn these tasks by reading books and watching tutorials and implementing them in the house. So in order to survive in this society, men and women should share their jobs in the home to have the work-life balance.
Rarely can a woman undergo all these difficulties both at home and work. Some may say that it always has been women’s job to do these tasks but in order to have a better life, they should contribute to each other. So it clearly is one of the man’s jobs to help her in the home-related tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 83, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
...culties both at home and work. Some may say that it always has been women's jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75503355705 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60434034299 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506711409396 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0789923973 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327487006421 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124058042223 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102349506338 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227501632186 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093360281681 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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