TPO32#1
In the lecture, the professor talked about likely cause of the strange sounds "quackers". Disputing the passage's arguments that there are three possible theories, she cited several pieces of evidence of showing that the hypotheses are highly impossible.
First, she said that the quackers were not from the ocra whales, there were two reasons. For one thing, ocra whales lived on the surface of marine; however, the sounds were from the deep ocean. second, they should be detected by sonar, if there were a group of ocra whale. This evidence contradicts the claim in the passage that orcas may make the sounds.
Second, the professor said the giant squids were last detected in the 1930s. It was rare that they suddenly appeared after thirty years and made the sounds until the 1980s.
Third, the professor dismissed the theory in the passage that the sounds were made by another country's submarines. she cited the evidence of the changing direction of the sounds indicating they were not from submarines. Moreover, the noise from submarines' engines was the same, even from different countries. And, the noise was unlike quackers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 186.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2311827957 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60210610466 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 145.348785872 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 419.366225166 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3779061165 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368773254364 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126713257412 0.0996497079465 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652649709839 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205780529554 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788867176012 0.0443174109184 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.