Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that people are less satisfied with their lives now. As far as I concerned, I disagree that people now are less happy than people were in the past. my arguments for this point are listed as follows.
one of the primary causes is that people have more opportunities to develop their interests which makes them satisfied. Contrast with before, people nowadays can learn different things via the internet. because of the internet developing, we can learn almost everything we want via websites or social media, like personal blogs, YouTube, etc. At the same time, having an interest help us make true friends and develop our confidence. All of these could make us happy.
For example, I have learned guitar from YouTube for five years. When I went to college, I was so nervous on the opening ceremony, and I did not know anyone besides me. I started to talk with a girl who had the same major as me. Surprisingly, she had been in a band before. we chatted about not only our favorite band but also the skills of playing the guitar. she became one of my best friends in college.
What is more, people may face strong stress now; however, we also have more ways to release their pressure. As before, people could only release their stress by exercising. There are more and more people choosing to play video games or watch movies to relax. Everyone can find the most suitable way to help take a break. For instance, one of my friends is poor at exercising because of asthma. she could not do any exercises to release the stress accumulating from daily life. one day, she found a funny puppy video on the internet. she laughed and forgot about the worrying problems at that moment. she found out a suitable relaxing way that did not exist in the past.
general speaking, people now are not less happy than before. Recognizing the fact that the more opportunities to develop interests and the different ways to release our pressure should drive us to conclude that people now are more satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67837837838 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38335014748 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2307938709 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.24 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.24 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344545396365 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928365665083 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147435886624 0.0737576698707 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244333352116 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212390242357 0.0645574589148 329% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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