A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Students are the future of any nation. Focusing on the adequate development of the children in their school life will decide the quality of engineers, doctors, scientists, etc. coming from our nation. That will subsequently affect the state of devlopment of our nation. In my view, I agree to this proposal of having same national curriculum for all the students of our nation. It will provide a fair platform to compete or judge the students across the nation, would ease quality control, and reduce the barriers in communication among the students across the country. First, by having the scheme of single curriculum for all the students will provide them a sense of belief that they are being taught, what everyone else is studying. They would not have any notion like students in developed cities or in modern schools have advanced and more opportunistic curriculum. Also, they would not feel their curriculum is different from others in terms of difficulty or content, so there is no valid comparison applicable. This will put an end to all these conisiderations, and will incur a sense of competion where all students would be ranked on a single platform. Secondly, having a single curriculum will help is easy management and quality administration. We can set up a central control board, which will look after the needs of schools across the country. Single Board of control will remove all the discrepancies and inefficiencies of the innumerable regional boards currently existing. It's hard to manage and maintain quality of education in a dispersed system. We can also have experts for various aspects for academic development who would head the academic department of our country. Finally, common course curriculum would also reduce the communication gap we currently have among students of different states. We can have mandatory subjects to be taught across the nation to enable this level of continuity in communication. For example, in a country like India, where we have various languages dominant in different states would be beneficial.
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- TOEFL integrated writing: Altruism 3
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16816816817 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90829949519 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9917185253 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6111111111 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221045697964 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878651103751 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846610135848 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221045697964 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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