Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
It is widely-held belief that alcohol is sold legally and this is responsible for alcoholism. There is also counter-argument that alcoholics can figure out a way to buy alcohol even if it is not sold legally. Considering this as a very sensitive topic and has several pros and cons for greater good for society, the topic is to be debated carefully from all angles before coming to any conclusion.
It is generally considered that liquor should not be sold to alcoholics (people who have addiction to alcohol, which can be injurious to their health). Despite such norms, liquor stores sell it to alcoholics with bypass methods as no bill or selling at higher rates etc. Despite several efforts taken by government and other welfare organizations working hard to stop such activities, no controls work on liquor stores. As it is highest source of income for government in the form of tax.
On the other hand, people manage to buy illegally, if it is not available legally. These store keepers want to make money, so they do not want to abide by the controls suggested by WHO.
I personally feel that more than efforts driven by government, it is people who should take stand to consume or discard such habits.
Overall, considering all the points discussed above it is clear that selling liquor legally or illegally to alcoholics is not going to solve the root problem. The root problem is an alcoholic himself should determine to get rid of this habit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
...o controls work on liquor stores. As it is highest source of income for government in the ...
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Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...t to abide by the controls suggested by WHO. I personally feel that more than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.884 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72599633162 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.6950004403 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329014037155 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10933474608 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959727204226 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147104375647 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102280797918 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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