Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People living in small villages are more satisfied with their life than those who living in the cities.
With the advancement of technology, man has changed his lifestyle from rural to urban. In this vein, civil life not only has advantages but also has disadvantages. In this regard, while some individuals hold the belief that city facilities lead to more satisfied, others think to live in small villages are more satisfied. I strongly agree with second groups that rural life is more satisfied, two significant reasons are presented in the paragraphs hereunder.
First of all, a favorable climate and a calm and natural environment in small villages provide a pleasant and satisfying environment for residents. In this case, the villagers have less stress because of the perfect and natural environment, and so healthier and more satisfied. My life in the village is a good example of this. When I was living in the metropolis three years ago, I was overwhelmed by the stress and depression that my doctors suggested that I emigrate to the village. Actually, pristine natural landscape like mountains and lakes helped me get away from my stressful life, As a result, life in the village taught me how to control my stress and live a happy life. On the other hand, had I stayed in the city, I would not have been recovered. Thus, while the dwellers of the countryside have life without stress and quiet, people in the big city are deprived of this invaluable condition.
Moreover, life in the busy city is very complicated because townspeople suffering from job-related stress. In other words, townspeople have Intense competition with their colleagues, therefore they have a hectic life. Therefore, the higher the stress, the lower the satisfaction. My own experience demonstrates this concept. In the example above, work-related stress, intense competition, and long hours of work caused me stress and depression that eventually I had to migrate. in other words, most rural people have easy lives because they do not have competition and competitive jobs. Therefore, it is no secret to anyone, not only rural society is more satisfied, but also is healthier.
In conclusion, having all the aforementioned reasons into account, I strongly believe that life in a small villaage is more satisfied because the village has a calm and natural environment, and because rural life is less complicated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14133333333 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95229507709 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514666666667 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0978342761 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.473684211 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225490576931 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661375257021 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491958798727 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147896410124 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038847617467 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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