Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
government">governmental art funding has always been a controversial issue. while governments today facing many monumental challenges such as budget shortfalls, rising unemployment and escalating needs for public assistance, they have to wrestle with these immediate pressure while trying to address long-term concerns, in which art funding might be typical. while the prompt states a suspension on art funding during harsh economic environment, though I believe that we shouldn’t squander public resources on extravagance at this time, I mostly disagree with the prompted recommendation and argue government">governmental art funding is still needed for two reasons.
it is true that, when myriad ordinary people are struggling outside for food and water, using public resources to fund a luxurious upper-class art activity is inappropriate or somehow cruel. history has witnessed much of this in those tyrannical periods, that the masses lived in dire poverty while the nobility indulged in pleasures, holding grand art ceremonies. such situation shall never be viewed reasonable in a modern democratic society. However, the funding of art doesn’t end up at these exquisites. There are many other kinds of art fundings as well, and they have positive influence on improving the living environment for a general populace.
Firstly, public art funding creates many job opportunities, therefore alleviates the severe situation of employment problem, which is crucial to the people’s livelihood. From a historical perspective, the first time U.S. government got involved in art is just the great Depression period. As a significant part of New Deal, the pwap (public work of art project), recruited many artists working on public artworks all over the country. The succeeding project, Federal project Number One of wpa (work project Administration), widened the scope of pwap, admitting more occupations such as musicians, writers and journalists to work on a public art project. it is just such actions that helped many jobless artists pulls through the hard time. In view of this, public art funding can somehow be an effective solution to the employment problem.
Secondly, in addition to provide basic job opportunities, public art funding often have more economic or social benefits. In terms of economic benefits, imagine a city which has successfully held an art festival, by attracting numerous tourists, the local tourism will definitely be promoted, then might indirectly influenced other industries, therefore fuels an economic growth. As to the latter issue, not to mention the inherent merits of art, the wpa hereinabrove, made great contribution to preserve a national history and culture by recording local folk songs or interviewing former slaves in the South. For this reason, a public art funding has an abundance of potential values to the whole community.
In conclusion, even at a difficult time, public art funding still served as a positive role. Rather than a misapprehended dissipate of flamboyance and gaudiness, an appropriate use of public art funding can much effectively uplift the hard situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2679.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59290187891 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41308216157 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584551148225 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2478771614 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.95 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.95 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182254906532 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604225751819 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336172341161 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107146004833 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369438335334 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.