On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
In the argument given above author suggested that the road accident is directly proportional to the number of mopeds on the road and the evidence render was of a town in the neighboring island anticipation the rule with decrease in amount of moped rented per day and author suggest that decreased in the rental moped will eventually decreases then number of accidents, but without anticipating the warranted evidence the argument should not take an affirm place.
Firstly, author suggested that mopeds in the balmer island increases to 100000 during summer it can be suggested that balmer is a tourist attraction for many to spend there vacation and directly cutting the rental rates eventually hamper the tourist convenience and which eventually hampers economy, without studying the crowd nature in seaville island directly implicating the similar rules in balmer leads to a detrimental effect.
The crowd renting moped in seaville island may be provided with proper training and with the proper traffic manual, so without knowing the fact about the traffic rules and facilities provided by seaville, assertion cannot be affirm.
Thirdly, the infrastructure facilities can play important role in avoiding accident, without knowing the infrastructure facilities just by cutting a rental rate of mopeds cannot render a warrant evidence for an argument.
So, to take any assertion taking place above factors should be considered well or else it may hamper the balmer,s economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
...sed in the rental moped will eventually decreases then number of accidents, but without a...
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Line 1, column 447, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d evidence the argument should not take an affirm place. Firstly, author suggested that...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...ed well or else it may hamper the balmer,s economy.
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lse it may hamper the balmer,s economy.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, so, then, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 28.8173652695 21% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 2260.96107784 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 441.139720559 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41379310345 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.56307096286 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7533050888 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 204.123752495 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538793103448 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 705.55239521 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.8473053892 201% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.279244361 57.8364921388 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.2 119.503703932 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.4 23.324526521 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 5.70786347227 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208105461788 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103437613598 0.0743258471296 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639863608204 0.0701772020484 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103437613598 0.128457276422 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639863608204 0.0628817314937 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 14.3799401198 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 48.3550499002 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.197005988 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.5979740519 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.32208582834 121% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 12.3882235529 222% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.1389221557 183% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.9071856287 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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