Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Even though a vast majority of people explicitly state that, nowadays,youngsters are not prone to help their communities, there are still some people who utterly contradict this stance. From my point of view, young people are exceedingly supportive for their communities, and I uphold this idea for three core reasons, which are elucidated below.
To begin with, the presence of social media is advantageous for raising awareness, and teenagers utilize social media invariably. In other words, posts, photos in the social media disseminates the issues in nearby communities, and convenes youngsters to tackle these problems. A compelling example of this argument is a post that I have encountered recently; the post was concerning a fire accident in the dwelling near the street I am residing, and the financial problems the family had. After seeing this post, I instantly asked my mother for some money, and then, conveyed it to that family. As it is evident from my personal experience, social media- emerged in 21st century- encourages teens to get inclined to help their communities.
In addition, currently, a plethora of schools and universities are setting mandatory volunteering for their students, and if students do not fulfil these tasks, they will not be able to meet the credits required for graduation. A lucid example that sheds the spotlight on this thesis is my school; my school, in the last years of students, demands them to volunteer, which is usually to succour their communities. My friends and I, for example, purchased some households for poor families, and accomplished our volunteering assignment. Thus, contemporarily, teenagers are dedicating their time in order to assist people who are living close to them.
In light of thoughts elaborated upon, I would like to conclude that currently, youngsters are devoting countless hours helping their communities. A philosopher, whose name eludes my mind right now, once mentioned, " the social media, current educational systems, and technology has got an array of drawbacks, but one of its advantages is that they are persuading children to become kind-hearted, benevolent people in the future".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, in addition, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38775510204 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10445663181 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615160349854 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0167625313 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.153846154 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150525512373 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533189933956 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394362773657 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919746681224 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389312172084 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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