Some People think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job. Others believe that it would be better to go straight into works and get experience instead.
Discuss both views and give your opinion!
Nowadays, deciding whether continuing the study to the higher degree is the best way to earn better profession still became an interesting discussion. Some says that leaving colleges and gain more experience in the work field will be a better decision for the future carrier. On the flip side, others argue that the higher one’s degree, the more likely he earns a promising job in the future. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the arguments. However, I oppose the first view and my reason will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, people who decide to end their study journey for a profession argues, merely obtain theoretical point of views inside the classroom, will not guarantee that someone will be able to cop in the practical fields. Such phenomena can be spotted in the number of graduates in some countries that still have no job after their graduation. In addition, good position in the companies always required individuals that have a bunch of experiences in the work field.
On the other hand, those who possessed a higher education degree, as it believes by the writer, frequently become creative individual since they already have deeper understanding about problems and how to come with either solution or innovation. Such ability undoblty needed by employers and society. In addition, many universities have an internship programs that will enable it students to obtain knowledge and job skills simultaneously.
To sumps up, it’s true that choosing work directly is the fastest way to earn a job. However, fastest way does not always mean the best. In fact taking a major degree in one field would be a better choice to gain more promising position among society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the fastest'.
Suggestion: , the fastest
...s the fastest way to earn a job. However, fastest way does not always mean the best. In f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, so, still, in addition, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06968641115 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73560661758 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1902091287 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215420397201 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666512943232 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312776125624 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122823840672 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423499453367 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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