The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The above chart depicts the information about male and female doing a unique exercise on a daily basis, where their age is ranging from young adult to older people in Australia in the period of 2010.
Overall, Number of males doing various fitness activities is fluctuated in all age groups. Meanwhile, females have ranked highest from the age of 25 to 65 and over. Except the age of 15 to 24 men’s topped.
Firstly, between age of 15 to 24 younger men’s have the higher value than young females doing exercise and has difference about 5.3%. However, the trend has reversed where females takes highest position having identical percentages but has slight vary about 0.7% age ranging from 25 to 64. Finally in the age of 65 and plus both men and women has similar values but slight difference about 0.1%. Therefore, women have dominated in performing various exercises on a regular basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 187, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'takes the highest'.
Suggestion: takes the highest
...r, the trend has reversed where females takes highest position having identical percentages b...
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Line 11, column 297, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...y about 0.7% age ranging from 25 to 64. Finally in the age of 65 and plus both men and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00653594771 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47185014631 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7306109526 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187789012526 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892080263277 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342353652014 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123019159862 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353116015941 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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