The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men as well as women in Australia, in different age brackets, who did regular exercise in 2010.
Overall, the chart depicts a lot of fluctuation in the physical activity of males and females of various age groups. Although the younger men seem to work out more than the ladies, the older men’s exercise level is almost the same as the women’s, perhaps slightly less.
The gents seem to be highly active between the ages of 15 to 24 years, where 52.8 percent regularly workout. They appear to be least health conscious in the age group of 35 to 44 years, where only 39.5 percent exercise regularly. Lastly, 46.7 percent men of age 65 years old or above make the effort to stay healthy.
Surprisingly, the middle aged women between 45 to 54 years old show the most movement at 53.3 percent. Even though 47.1 percent women of age 65 years and above exercise, which is least among ladies, it is still higher than men that age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the least'.
Suggestion: be the least
...rcent regularly workout. They appear to be least health conscious in the age group of 35...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68208092486 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47802328856 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1627502806 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.25 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281245749127 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126578589713 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935330029053 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18784262479 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104957683748 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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