The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The given images depicts how the university's sport center will be changed after reconstruction in the future.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that sport center will changed entirely in terms of recreational facilities. A lot of new features will be added to place.

Now, turning to the details of changes , the main noticable addition to the sport center was the outdoor center will be demolished and a large leisure pool will used to be in the western side of sport center. However, changing room, the pool, the seating and reception, which are located in the middle of the building, will be unchanged, whereas gym is going to be bigger.

In addition to this , another physical features are going to construction of a 2 dance studio in the north eastern side . Likewise, 2 advance changing room in two opposite sides. Also,a big sport hall will be installed near 2 dancing studios and a cafe will be located between the changing room and the main entrance in the bottom of right corner.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed after reconstruction in the future. Overall, it can be clearly seen that spo...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
... be clearly seen that sport center will changed entirely in terms of recreational facil...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Now, turning to the details of changes , the main noticable addition to the spor...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...emolished and a large leisure pool will used to be in the western side of sport cent...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng to be bigger. In addition to this , another physical features are going to ...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...2 dance studio in the north eastern side . Likewise, 2 advance changing room in tw...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...hanging room in two opposite sides. Also,a big sport hall will be installed near 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, likewise, so, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81871345029 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62028631702 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2535883935 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151314496165 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760056530732 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709277765843 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121314510468 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647754233641 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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