Dear Sir,
The purpose of this letter is to complain about the iPhone I purchased from your shop yesterday. The iPhone has various problems and missing accessories. Therefore, I would like to request a reimbursement of full payment or replacing with the new one.
To adduce, the iPhone box has missing headphone and the adapter for charging a device. Furthermore, the home button and the slide button on the left side of the iPhone for toggling between modes are not working. Most importantly, the screen of the iPhone is broken from the top right corner and has many scratches.
I am unhappy with the purchased I had made from your shop. Therefore, I would like to request you to arrange a full refund which is seven hundred dollars plus Tax. Furthermore, as the iPhone is of my likeness and I always prefer using the iPhone. Therefore, I would consider replacement instead of reimbursement with a new piece.
I look forward to hearing from you regarding my concerns.
Yours Faithfully,
Moses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94705882353 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79005277077 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1696061804 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979298035453 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316699564489 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471445069289 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597232359619 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407809913888 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.