Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in connection to the advertisement posted in the local newspaper about the seminar held in Auckland. However, My name is John. Currently, I am working as Deputy Assitant in Mutual Funds of Association. I am a Canadian National and possessing a desire to attend the seminar. Therefore, I am seeking further missing information such as dates, program and accommodation.
Firstly, I want to know the dates and the time the seminar commences and ends. In addition to this, the hours required to attend the workshop. Secondly, the program schedules and course outline detailing each topic conducted while attending the seminar. Also, I would like to know the program offers practical implementations or based on theory.
Most Importantly, I would like to acquire details about accommodation. For example, nearby hotels, rooms or flats available for rent or accommodation arrangements are managed by yourself? These were the information missing in the newspaper I was looking to acquire. I would appreciate your efforts toward presenting all the required information.
I look forward to hearing from you soon concerning my interests.
Yours Faithfully,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40487500172 2.54303337028 134% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664516129032 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7441696646 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4615384615 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9230769231 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24719308618 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671985923439 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655459210697 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12610915164 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528121830131 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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