You bought a ticket to music concert. However, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Tell your friend the details about the concert.
Explain why you are unable to go.
and explain how your friend could receive your ticket
Dear Martha,
How are you doing? The purpose of this letter is to inform you about the concert held on 14 August at the national stadium. The concerts speciality is that all the superstars of the music industry will perform. however, this concert will be one of the first concerts in the history of Pakistan in which all music stars will compete. therefore, I know you are fond of music and never miss any of the music concerts.
I bought two tickets for this concert. however, last week I had an accident incurred, because of injuries I have had at arms and legs it has become impossible to attend an event. therefore, I would like to offer you these tickets at half price. As a result, this would save my investment made into these tickets.
Furthermore, I can courier these tickets either to your office or at your residential address. On the other hand, you can avail these tickets in person by visiting Memorial Hospital Room No. 13.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Martha, How are you doing? The purpose of this l...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'concerts'' or 'concert's'?
Suggestion: concerts'; concert's
... 14 August at the national stadium. The concerts speciality is that all the superstars o...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ars of the music industry will perform. however, this concert will be one of the first ...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... in which all music stars will compete. therefore, I know you are fond of music and never...
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Line 11, column 40, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... I bought two tickets for this concert. however, last week I had an accident incurred, ...
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Line 11, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...s become impossible to attend an event. therefore, I would like to offer you these ticket...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, look, so, therefore, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86592178771 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44672328936 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9968672417 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313147664798 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110573713633 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543230585065 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158318951036 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495337141742 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.