You bought a ticket to music concert. However, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Tell your friend the details about the concert.
Explain why you are unable to go.
and explain how your friend could receive your ticket
Dear Bhanu,
It has been quite a long since we talked. Hope you are fine? You will be glad to know that I have been promoted to associate professor from assistant professor. I am writing the letter to you to offer you a ticket of a music concert of singer Satinder Sartaj at venue Tagore Theater Sector 18 Chandigarh on 24th of June 2018 that is on this Sunday.
As you know, I am big fan and admirer of Sartaj, I did not wanted to miss this opportunity to view him live. So, I booked the ticket in advanced but yesterday I received an email from my Head of Department, that I have to go to Delhi this Sunday to welcome delegates from Japan that are on visit at my company. Therefore, it will be very difficult for me to reach back to Chandigarh till evening. Due to which I will be unable to attend this concert.
Hence, I thought that I should offer you this ticket to you. The tickets reserve the right for entry of two adult, you can take along someone with you, who like live music shows. The tickets are in the form of QR code, if your are interested kindly apprise me and I will send you this code through Whatsapp.
See you soon.
Thanking You
Yours truly,
Harry Sidhu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ig fan and admirer of Sartaj, I did not wanted to miss this opportunity to view him li...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34222222222 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27174159546 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2136667667 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1538461538 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327320486426 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123208215648 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811340961111 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198875629801 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762005218425 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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