Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, there is a colossal upsurge in the trend to see the prodigies discussing that, if elderly people are permitted to work after retirement age it would inevitably cause some issues. Howbeit, I debunk and proffer it won't be detrimental. In this essay, I will discuss both the arguments by analysing it.
On the one hand, there are compelling pieces of evidence for not allowing older people to work after the sixties. The paramount concrete reason is, senior citizens might supersede the job of young employees, and this result in fewer job vacancies. For instance, according to the recent survey conducted by Times newspaper, in India, lay-off has become alarmingly increased by 30%. In addition to that, due to their age concern, elderly people necessitate special care which would cost an extra effort for the employer. Therefore, these people have some valid reasons for not supporting work after retirement age.
On the flip side, there are certain advantages like the wisdom of old people can be exploited by the company. To exemplify, in China, one of the leading tiles company produce all their products designed by an 80-year-old man, who mastered in ancient techniques in a marble design. As a result, knowledge of this person boosts the company's economy. Furthermore, senior citizen pensions can be repaid in the form of taxes which they earn through a certain profession. However, there are concerns about unemployment and individual care for aged people.
To conclude, I firmly agree that, by employing an older person after retirement never cause a profound issue; whereas it helps the companies to stimulate their profits and return the taxes to the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17753623188 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69830738407 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5125571369 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21672516369 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695258919509 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894413863788 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122701621243 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629853940817 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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