Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?
Working after the age of sixty is encouraged by some people, while others argue it could create different issues. This essay agrees with the latter notion that older adults should retire after 60 as they start experiencing health problems and also would not perform to their best.
Both physical and mental abilities decline after 60 years of age, on average, there are many concerns that an over 60 individual will start experiencing, such as chronic diseases and neurological disorders. Perhaps one cannot expect similar performance as a normal person. For example, according to the Times survey report, around 60% of retired individuals suffer from cardiac arrests and paralysis. Hence, in many countries, the average age of retirement is sixty years.
Another reason is that job demands eight to nine hours of commitment daily, which means family and personal time should be limited, to attain task completion, which can be anticipated from a younger generation, whereas a person who has completed his years of service and have retired, should focus on living a life following his dreams or spending time with his family. For instance, there are many retirement homes which offer a better quality of service to the elderly, especially health and recreational activities and also guide them with their future investments and business. However, there are exceptional professions which require experienced and abled experts such as research scientists and stock planners.
In conclusion, it is argued that senior citizens should be made to do work, but I believe that they have played their part and it is time for them to look after their health, family and conquer their dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23985239852 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63291308534 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660516605166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.3130476261 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132610865887 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543686391942 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593950233989 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929634121314 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653070443377 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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