All Parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children’s future.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
These days every parent is concerned about their children’s future and they want to consider the best available option for their children. Though a number of people believe that it's best to teach skills in schools, while others believe that the best way for a child to have a good future, if he learns a vast variety of subjects. This essay will discuss why teaching skills in school is beneficial but why having a vast variety of subjects will help them in future in a better way.
Skill is something which is used in the later part of life and according to some people it should be taught in schools. Skills are required when a student finishes high school, some students go for further studies or they can go for a job, a job is a place where they will be needing these skills. For example: - one of the most required skills for the job is teamwork, if someone has it them he won’t face any kind of difficulties in working in an environment where team effort is required. In the end having some skills will always help you grow in the organization.
On the other hand, if school will teach vast variety of subjects then the student will have alot of options from which he can choose. Each student have different subject which interests them and if a school will have those subjects them it will help them to get to know them in a better way before choosing there career in it. For example:- In India there are majorly 3 streams after 10th class, and from those streams a student can choose any one of them, so the study they have done till 10th will help them to choose that stream. Being able to understand the subject in the advance wil help them grow further in life.
Each and every parent want to do as much as possible to get the best opportunity for their children. This essay discussed why skills which can be taught in school is a good option but why there should be a variety of subject which can be taught in the school. In my opinion skills and study goes hand in hand and both of them should be taught equally because if a person who only has knowledge but doesn’t have the skill to convey it is a waste of that knowledge.
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- Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 67
- All Parents want the best opportunities for their children There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children s future Discuss both sides and give your opinion 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...a job, a job is a place where they will be needing these skills. For example: - one of the...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... from which he can choose. Each student have different subject which interests them ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41854636591 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32163600722 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451127819549 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0922716685 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.928571429 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308454374108 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120490366726 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774855427961 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210294398274 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09321272001 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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