You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule.

Submitted by saba2818 on Tue, 09/17/2019 - 08:04

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in taking Project Management course on Thursday evening starting from September.

The course on project management will teaches us the new techniques to handle the projects. Now a days we are dealing with different types of projects, this course is all about managing multiple type of project. In addition, It will give insight about how to handle the complex project through different techniques.

The main purpose for this course is that it will teach different technique to use at workplace environment for the better performance which will be beneficial for the company. In addition to that it will also enhance the managerial skill of an individual.

It is a two month course, with one class in a week. The class will be on every Thursday starting at 5:30 pm so it will be suitable for me to leave the office at 5:00 pm so that i can reach on time.

I look forward for your positive response.

Yours Sincerely,
Saba Khan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
... The course on project management will teaches us the new techniques to handle the pro...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... new techniques to handle the projects. Now a days we are dealing with different types of ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... techniques to handle the projects. Now a days we are dealing with different types of ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to leave the office at 5:00 pm so that i can reach on time. I look forward fo...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84971098266 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6589846694 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5871226843 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176633100587 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700133560896 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419180142572 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898614421088 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309639454891 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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