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Dear Sir/Madam
I trust this letter finds you well.
I am Vicky Tran from MC Investments Pty Ltd. On behalf of my company, I had contacted and organised a business meeting at your hotel over last weekend.
We are happy to inform that our partners and visitors really enjoyed their time at your hotel. They were very impressed with the decor and new renovation in the hotel' lobby and entrance. The open-air venue in the side of the hotel was a bonus for people who wanted to smoke and talked privately.
Unfortunately, I am fraud to note that we did receive some bad feedback about the food served during the lunch break. The fact was that the food was not listed clearly for different diet requests such as vegetarian, guest free. This make our guests very unhappy and upset as they were not sure what type of food being served. Additionally, drinks coming with the food were not top up on time, as I had to ask some waiters to fill up. We honestly expected better food and beverage services from a high-end hotel like yours.
From our experience, I would recommend you to re-organize the menu for buffet services, provide more training to your staff and maintain better communications during the services.
We love our hotel and hope to see a positive change when we come back in the future.
Kind regards
Vicky.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, if, really, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68803418803 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46062201007 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649572649573 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.064638682 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3571428571 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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