The graph shows the wheat export in different countries in million of tonnes.

Essay topics:

The graph shows the wheat export in different countries in million of tonnes.

The line graph illustrates the ups and downs in exporting wheat in three different countries such as Australia, Canada, and European community.

At the onset, it is clear that Canada was the most popular country in exporting wheat, but at last the highest amount of wheat was exported from European community.

Now, turning into the details, In Australia, there was 15 million of tonnes wheat which was exported in 1985.Although wheat export was gradually increased at approximately 16 million of tonnes in 1986, the amount of wheat export plunged at around 11 million of tonnes in 1989 and continued to the same amount in exporting wheat till 1990.

In the case of European community, in the beginning of the decade, the amount of wheat export was roughly 17 million of tonnes, while there was a slight dip in exporting wheat just below 15 million of tonnes in 1986, before stabilizing at exactly 15 million of tonnes till in 1988. Afterthat, wheat export escalated at 19 million of tonnes in 1989 and reached at 21 million of tonnes in 1990 which was higher than the wheat export from Canada.

Like other countries, Canadian sold 19 million of tonnes wheat in 1985, which was greater in amount than other countries like Australia and European Community. Meanwhile, wheat export experienced a decline by 17.5 million of tonnes in 1986, before skyrocketing at 25 million of tonnes in 1988. However, the amount of wheat export plummeted at just below 15 million of tonnes and again gradually climbed at 19 million of tonnes in the following year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...tonnes wheat which was exported in 1985.Although wheat export was gradually increased at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 33.7804878049 186% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93129770992 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59959251467 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419847328244 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1083982131 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.5 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376848765682 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21716846754 0.103423049105 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545607941432 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257926623271 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376323172293 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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