Many people hold the opinion that the only method to stop poverty and famine happening is growing economic capacity. However, others say that increasing economy is destroying the natural environment in this developed world, therefore, there is not necessity to grow it more. This essay will discuss reasons and remedies for both views.
With restricted availability of working and making their own living, a significant number of people are suffering from poverty and hungry in recent decades. Moreover, some of them are robbed their agriculture or livestock ability by wealthy people. In particular, because of administers doing wrong policies and decisions or due to their a grab of garbage. Furthermore, there are numerous solutions to improve the country's position, such as supporting import and export properly in order to improve people's life condition. Supporting the international co-operation allows the opportunity to get subsidizes and helps from other privileged or developed counties as co-operation between two country can be beneficial for both countries.
If we now consider about people who are opponents of financial growth, their concept might be somewhat adequate because it is unescapable truth that environmental issues are expanded by man-made disasters. To illustrate, global warming and air pollution are the main environmental problem which damage the natural bond. All of these disasters are caused by human, especially products and constructions made by us. To be more specific, global warming id rooted from exceed consumption and releases of some toxic gases, while the underlying factor of air pollution is carbon dioxide from car all made by people with economic progress.
In my opinion, the way to execute impoverishment and famine must be apart from economic growth and effective policies and contracts should be encouraged about these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, in particular, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95095585058 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5886002166 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235637127135 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668668862436 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607087006963 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137218154158 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072003454386 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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