You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.As part of a class assignment you have to write about the following topic.A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets lots of exercise, and avoidsstress.What do people do to stay

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

As part of a class assignment you have to write about the following topic.

A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets lots of exercise, and avoids

stress.

What do people do to stay healthy in your country? You should write at least 250 words

The person possessing a good quality life with equal effort to their health on exercise, diet plan mostly considered as healthy. The statement itself holds solutions which most country people followed with. In our country, people carry exercise at gym or at home for physical health and meditation for mental health.

Firstly, exercise is considered as one of the most inevitable health activities worldwide. The term is

vague but it is often clustered according to the need and time of people. Some support sports as great exercise while some work hard in movement of the body and get admirable physics. For instance, as most of the country people our community people can also be seen at gym doing exercise and playing sports like badminton, swimming, table tennis, and lane tennis in morning and evening. These kind of exercise makes people body healthier and fit.

Secondly, meditation is one of the most powerful techniques practiced in our country to make mind

peace, active and calm as well as avoiding stress. It is one of the major work to healthier life. Since our country if full of tradition and culture where meditation is part of a grant from our ancestors to lead a prosperous and healthier life, we are also habitual to those activities and are spreading across the world.

To sum up, there were many activities involved in our country to stay healthy life where sporting

exercise at gym or park and doing meditation topped the list. These are two most acceptable things in our country where equal importance for physical and mental health is given.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Vague
...lth activities worldwide. The term is vague but it is often clustered according to ...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...and lane tennis in morning and evening. These kind of exercise makes people body healthier...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Peace
...practiced in our country to make mind peace, active and calm as well as avoiding st...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Exercise
...y to stay healthy life where sporting exercise at gym or park and doing meditation top...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96603773585 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52104280356 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558490566038 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5955069689 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.078747323512 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302638700786 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293274032013 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0348867905414 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03022223273 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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