Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining.
What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships?
What can be done to help couples feel closer?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:
12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:
EN-US">The relationship between married has been always complicated topic for
debates. An opinion of individuals claims that an ability to sustain wellbeing
between couples demands a lot of effort. This essay will discuss the main
problems associated with maintenance of the good correlation between couples
that stay far from each other and propose some possible solutions to avoid
them.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:
12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:
EN-US">Firstly, nowadays living far away from one’s home for a long period of
time is a common practice and such type of lifestyle could be challenging for
both wives and husbands. The tendency of the modern world is globalization and
many multinational companies place their factories in different regions, so
people must leave their places for living abroad. For example, the well-known
consultant agency PwC recruits annually 10000 employees from different
countries and they have to abandon their partners. Thus, single living
currently is the global trend caused by the elimination of borders. Moreover,
those difficulties provoke the desire to be as close to each other as possible.
Lack of communication between pairs often results in a feeling of frustration and
in reciprocal pursuit to see their nearest as soon as possible. For instance,
Research group of the British scientists demonstrated that 9 out of 10
individuals want to return home when they are on the service. In other words,
the inability to hug one’s dearest stimulates the mutual will to do it
instantly.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:
12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:
EN-US">First of all, the obvious solution is to pick the closest working place
and the second one is to improve trust. Firstly, Internet gives us an ability
to find the acceptable job situated next to the door and come back and spend
free time together. Secondly, living far away from home should propel
cooperation between married people. They should call each other, share opinions
using different means such as internet and eventually those actions can even
improve their relationships.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:
12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:
EN-US">To conclude, long distance between pairs makes relations more
complicated. It could be as the occasion of remote place of work but it
individual always have a choice of working nearby. Moreover, such type of
relationships could regarded as a challenge and even strengthen.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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| 2019-09-19 | SUSANNA PETROSYAN | 84 | view |
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2983.0 1615.20841683 185% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 7.6881443299 5.12529762239 150% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.45852690386 2.80592935109 301% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579896907216 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.038475204 49.4020404114 346% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.866666667 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 40.0 4.38176352705 913% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0736091379981 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365194452399 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294626485419 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0266289940064 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356348677406 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.26 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 27.62 12.4159519038 222% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 24.0 9.78957915832 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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