It is an undeniable fact that the dressing sense, varieties of food restaurants and sources of entertainment have been changed in the last few decades. However, fair amount of people advocate that this trend leads to a society of selfish people while others support that it will play a vital role in their future of life. I am illustrating my points of view in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, ample of the families leave their children alone to be independent because they do not have too much time to nourish them. It is good to survive them independently and learn the myriad of things of the world, however, ironically sometimes it might be dangerous and involve them unsocial activities like drug addiction, regressive attires and unwanted ways for enjoying life. For instance, in a national survey, it has been observed that the number of youth indulged in drug addiction and sex rackets only because they do not want to discuss their choices with their guardians.
On the flip side, youth nowadays enjoy their freedom and choose an outfit that they appreciate. It does not mean they are selfish. The way of dressing and fashion trend is increasing at a fast pace in this era and youngsters try to live at the same pace. There are plethora of career options emerged in this contemporary world which attract teenagers and according to their interest and they are choosing their career option. For instance, many of the stand-up comedians enjoy their profession and earn name, fame and money because of their personal choices while such type of occupations mostly discarded by society in the beginning.
To recapitulate, I think youth should choose their options independently but also discuss the result with their elders and family should teach to identify the difference between right and wrong choice before allow them free in society, so that they avoid to involve in hazardous activities.
- In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life.To what extent do you agree? 56
- The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest? 78
- Many people believe that formal "pen and paper" examinations are not the best method of assessing education achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. 78
- Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- In many cities, security measures, such as the use of video cameras in public places,are being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.Do the benefits of increased security outweigh t 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sult with their elders and family should teach to identify the difference between...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid involving'.
Suggestion: avoid involving
...llow them free in society, so that they avoid to involve in hazardous activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01253918495 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64385451314 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595611285266 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3622896836 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193071235301 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624383692436 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523935333478 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114772968674 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173603215608 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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