In this contemporary world, the education system has been changed in the last few decades. However, it is a debatable topic that children should study in single-sex or co-educational institute. I think going to single-sex schools have many pitfalls in the future of life which I am discussing in ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, in this era of industrialization where females work with males in every sector, it is compulsory to communicate with each other properly, however, if a student studies in a single-sex school might cause hesitation to talk with each other which impact the business also. According to a national survey, it has been observed that in many industries, co-educational are better than single-sex learners to create a friendly environment.
On the flip side, some people who have conservative thoughts support a single-sex education system and advocate that it might assist them to focus on their studies. They think that the co-educational system distracts them from study because adolescence is the age where students attracted to the opposite gender which heads them to unsocial activity.
To cap it all, I firmly support the co-educational system for the comprehensive growth of a student, however, there are little disadvantages but it can handle by proper guidance.
- Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations 78
- In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life.To what extent do you agree? 56
- Some people believe that playing a musical instrument can be beneficial in many different ways. Others think it is a waste of time to play a musical instrument. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers, rather than benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...th each other which impact the business also. According to a national survey, it has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35436893204 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18288573742 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9578241051 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.875 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295571946712 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135782602486 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919647735057 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170409605552 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979531838743 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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