Many museums charge for admission ehile others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweighvthe advantages?
Museum as a educational facility can enter freely, but some museums take fees for their entrance. There are several reasons make people argue that admission fees are important for museums or not.
Admission fee to enter into museum can increase museum's income to operate it. Museum's admission fee does not have to be expensive one, because they also receive annual fund from goverment. For example, Museum Benteng Rotterdam in Makassar Indonesia asks just for Rp 5,000 for admission fee. Despite this, it will give a chance for museum staff to conduct corruption if they do not have any proper regulation.
What is more, increasing income by admission fee regulation makes museums have better conservation of historical heritages, and provide them sophisticated facilities in museums. This is giving visiters comfortable atmosphere and preserving historical heritages to the next generation in the future. For example, museum that icing on the cake of Europe art histories, Louvre Museum located in French is charging people for £15 as admission fee, and the historical heritages in there are preserved well by them. However, admission fee makes people not that interesting to come to museum.
In conclude to say, admission fees as additional income make museums preserve well their collections, so everyone can learn about what happen in the past as our histories that have influences for our life now. How should people react for this issue? Hopefully, people should aware of this action as their contribution to preserve these historical heritages to the next generation in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on fee to enter into museum can increase museums income to operate it. Museums ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34387351779 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73188016608 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5267544695 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346101847019 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152566910398 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873831951611 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241920212869 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608916216752 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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