You are living overseas and you have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information are incorrect. Write a letter to the editor.
In the letter, you should:
• explain that an article contains wrong information
• supply the correction information instead
• provide some more interesting information for the editor to publish in the future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to highlight an incorrect piece of information relevant to my country mentioned in an article published by your newspaper recently.
In an article published by your newspaper on July 5th, inaccurate information was given about the natural resources of Pakistan. This article was based on Asian countries and their assets. It was written in the article that Pakistan is the third largest producer of salt and coal in the world whereas it is the largest salt and coal producing country. However, Saudi Arabia and Philippine are at the second and third numbers respectively in yielding these sources.
In addition to this, my country also has rich resources of other minerals, for instance, Copper, Bronze and Silver. It does not only export products made of these minerals and earn money but also provides local people with employment opportunities. So my country is economically stable and its unemployment rate is quite lower similar to developed countries in the west.
You could also publish these social and economic facts of my country in future. I would be happy to provide you more information about it.
Your Sincerely,
John Paul.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to highlight an...
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Line 15, column 70, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...social and economic facts of my country in future. I would be happy to provide you more i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, so, third, whereas, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19487179487 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73970969347 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8434480155 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0909090909 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252094490749 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877249587598 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861434984406 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164308393226 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982304372397 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.