People are surrounded by advertising, which has increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?
Nowadays, people’s lifestyle has changed a great deal because of next level advertisements. Due to adverts, they buy modern and advanced commodities which make their lives easier than before. However, sometimes they spend money extravagantly under the influence of adverts. I think benefits of advertisements outweigh than its drawbacks.
While looking at positive side of advertisement, it makes people’s life comfortable. As they get to know about latest and better version of several products, so they purchase them to facilitate themselves and their families. While growing advertisement campaigns in every field of life provide people with useful information, for instance objects, medical procedures and instruments, people keep improving their lifestyles by buying these advanced products. They bring better version of things at homes and work places which also ease and satisfy them. Moreover, it improves economy too when people demand products and manufacturers supply them. Therefore, advertisement have certain loud benefits for people.
As far as drawbacks are concerned, sometimes people are triggered by persuasive advertisements that they purchase products without its need. In other words, it increases temptation of people and they spend money to satisfy their desire. This can cause a chaotic situation, for instance, a sort of competition among people to get whatever they see in advertisements without realizing its true need.
In my opinion, although advertisements intrigue people to buy more and more, they convey information about every latest product in the market. Now it depends on people not to buy things unless they require them genuinely. Apart from increased consumerism, which can be controlled by people themselves, advertisements have major and obvious benefits in life, such as comfort, facilitation and improvements. Therefore, its advantages in every day life are more significant than its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 433, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...improvements. Therefore, its advantages in every day life are more significant than its disa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, i think, sort of, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84429065744 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1884644392 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4357161749 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958563609616 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354206301297 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026601991119 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643250016629 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00411696097627 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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