Nowadays we have easily access to the information. Through the internet and television we can keep updated of what is happening all over the world. I believe that is one of the best benefits of the technology. We have to do a good use of it considering that it can positive affect our lives, even if there is not a clear change on our daily life. I will be discussing more about it on the following essay.
Firstly, knowing about events happening around the world keep us informed and someway rises our knowledge. Although it is true that we can take our days normally without reading news, because it will not change our routine unless if you work in a job that is directly related to it as journalist, governate, public figures, etc. However, having the habitude of reading news can increase our general knowledge and it can give a long term impact. For example, once I was talking to some friends and one of them asked me about the elections of my country, saying that he was sorry about the way that is was going because the candidate that was winning the elections was a military and very strict. After that we started to talk about politics of many countries where recently suffered the same problem. But there were some people who was not following the conversation because they were not informed about what was going on the world.
Secondly, other advantage of being well informed about mundial events is that you can better understand what is happening in your own country. Historically, the event tends to repeat over time and over places. That fact is potentialized by the globalization that we are living nowadays. Then, what is happening in China can directly affect the USA, for example. One good example to stade this idea is the Arabic spring movement that happened in Egypt some years ago. Maybe it would not happen in the way that it did if the Egyptians did not have access of the world news and the movement would not generate the same impact if it was not a notice all over the world.
Lastly, the exchange of information through the media can help in the integration of science. It allows that a discovery made in a country can be rapidly spread around the world. By doing that exchange of information, a research can complete or confront another, both situation are helping on the the science improvement. An practical illustration of this is the development of medicines by some countries that allows the cure of many diseases before untreated worldwide.
Despite the events happing very far from us right now do not directly change our daily live, it can have positive impact in our live for a long-term, by increasing the education level and overall knowledge. It also brings benefits to the science progress, politics and even in a random talk between friends. Thus, I strong believe that it is important to be updated of what is happening worldwide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...ng that he was sorry about the way that is was going because the candidate that wa...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...that he was sorry about the way that is was going because the candidate that was wi...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ections was a military and very strict. After that we started to talk about politics ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... another, both situation are helping on the the science improvement. An practical illus...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other, both situation are helping on the the science improvement. An practical il...
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Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
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Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2388.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 504.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7380952381 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59935780487 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 763.2 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6014727033 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188803762964 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517678820314 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491686257288 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103159698097 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042134081582 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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