Differently of others animals, the humans have the ability to think, to innovate and to have some physical movements that allows a better adequacy of the environment to their needs. Consequently, when the humans found that it is more beneficial to remain on the same place, they start to strongly change the area nearby. Since then, the human activity never stopped and it allows a longer and more comfortable life.
Since the humans stopped being nomads, they performed a lot of environmental changes which leaded to a better quality of life. House constructions, animal domestication, agriculture, commerce, creation of tools, energy and piped water are some examples of important changes made after the end of the nomadism. All these changes were crucial to permanence and progression of the specie, by allowing a safer, longer and better life. While nomads, the humans died very early because of the natural catastrophes, cold weather and infections.
The humans are all the time making more science progress and extending their knowledge and abilities to improve quality of life. Because of the discovery of antibiotics, for example, nowadays it is possible to treat a lot of disease which were synonymous of death in the past. In addition, the advance knowledge on civil engineer allows families to be safe living in constructions made to resist to the storms, thunders and other natural phenomena.
Locomotion is other important improvement made by human activity. After the creation of cars, boats and airplanes, people are able to go everywhere they want in a short period of time. Such advance provided the discovery of other lands in the world, as well as different kind of nature, people and culture. Besides that, the improvement of locomotion allows a linkage between people of different regions, phenomenon called globalization. For example, Americans consume products made in China, meanwhile Chineses are watching American movies. Also, it facilitates people’s transport between different parts of the world, expanding their knowledge of history, culture experiences and creating new social circles.
To sum up, I strongly believe that human activity improves quality of life. It is a fact that the human activity has also negative impact on the natural resources on Earth, however, it makes life better in many aspects, such as health, economic and social.
- TOEFL ESSAY: Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to other people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice. 81
- Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; other have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages if each and support your viewpoint. 60
- Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give reasons and specific examples for your choice. 66
- It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 60
- TOEFL ESSAY: The college years are the best time in a person's life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e to go everywhere they want in a short period of time. Such advance provided the discovery of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85038884247 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8536623295 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214408604191 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663339605364 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483297345736 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121938242733 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448334480398 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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