Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Agree or disagree?
public exhibitions and art galleries are the places where people can experience the heritage of ancient monuments. it is believed that these galleries are not necessary and whatever we want to see we can see such objects and crafts on a computer. I completely disagree with that statement because physically watching these things is different from just watching them on a screen without any reality in it.
To initiate, earlier there were many options to visit and explore ancient artifacts and crafts. But, in the modern era its difficult to find one. Whether it could be due unavailability of time or lack of interest among the public to maintain one for other's sake. A complete indulgence involves in enjoying a feel of ancient objects. when we encounter a dress that king's used to wear we can experience their sewing skills by touching those clothes and feel its elegance. For example, Recently when I visited a science museum I found my favorite tech there which was invented back in 18 th century and the fact is that the present generation scientists couldn't able rule out how that clock is still working.
Moreover, if we stay at home and choose to watch museum arts and ancient monuments from a computer we cannot get the feeling and reality of the antiques and vintage products. Furthermore, the dramatic and illusion of objects is such a waste of time and anyhow we are not near to reality. For Instance, A study conducted on a group of people revealed that more than 35% of men and women are interested in watching everything on a computer screen and all of these were expressed their unrealistic experiences itself.
In conclusion, I definitely disagree that museums' need is not necessary, its a definitive requirement to keep the ancient objects future proof and also discourage the tradition of watching things on computer for self greed without any real feel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92789968652 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72209720431 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595611285266 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7750219945 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191920521254 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612613622224 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691415581487 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117328824561 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809274415414 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.