Main stream media channels tend to reflect issues and disasters more than positive incidents. A group consider this approach as a bad effect for society in general and people in particular. I partly agree with this notion based on some reasons.
From one side, spreading hot news about unpleasant situations may be beneficial to some extent. Firstly, it makes people aware and warned about emergencies and helps them developing a sense of carefulness to prevent them if possible or become ready to face them at the moment of occurrence. For instance, the police shows different crimes on media for educational purposes. Secondly, mass media can attract a great attention and make big contribution to overcome issues and solve problems. An example of this, is the warning news about environmental phenomena which brings people together.
From another side, focusing completely on bad news, can surely cause some major problems to the society well being. One of the results from this, may be threating the sense of safety among people. This would surely lead people to lose their healthy mental state and get suspicious and pessimistic about the world. A clear example of this approach is that they feel unsafe about traveling to third world countries due to the delusion of war or terrorism. Furthermore, bad news report increases the rate of depression and suicide in the society. Hence, some people consciously decide not to follow breaking news. Thus, from my personal stand point, we should take action in order to decrease the influence of bad news.
To sum up, although negative news may have some benefits for society, ultraism would definitely harm the audiences. Therefore, I personally believe it is vital to take balance between broadcasting good and bad news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...warned about emergencies and helps them developing a sense of carefulness to prevent them ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thus, well, for instance, in general, in particular, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1660899654 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66204905858 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643598615917 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0763733734 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188683171058 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564425827592 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348505044481 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110628556507 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273879309225 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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