You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you have moved
Describe the new house
Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Jane,
It's such a long time since we last met in Vietnam 2 years ago. I can't wait to update to you that my family and I have just moved to your city, Toronto. you know that I have always dreamt of living abroad. last year, I tried to apply for Canada immigration and luckily, I was granted a permanent residence for the family after 1 year of waiting.
The immigration department was so supportive in helping me find an accommodation beforehand. It's a small apartment located in the north of the city center with an affordable rental. The house is fully furnished with home appliances, beds, wardrobes... we only bought some small decorations like paintings, flower pots in the balcony.
This weekend we invited some friends and neighbours to come over. If you are free, please come and join us on our welcoming party. my address is No.1602, New apartment.
With love,
Mai Pham
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e we last met in Vietnam 2 years ago. I cant wait to update to you that my family an...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...have just moved to your city, Toronto. you know that I have always dreamt of livin...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
... I have always dreamt of living abroad. last year, I tried to apply for Canada immig...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the family after 1 year of waiting. The immigration department was so suppor...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ng me find an accommodation beforehand. Its a small apartment located in the north ...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ome and join us on our welcoming party. my address is No.1602, New apartment. W...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68205465264 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724358974359 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6282446002 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173649885378 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557304491403 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069840819799 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104948237755 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552026020845 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.